Who are you

Really can relate on this one. A person who left such a big impression in some way, just by see him/her once,, weird actually.
Very nice,,

Take care

It seems that those who make some sort of impact in our lives, whether good or bad, always leaving us asking "who" and "why".

I like how you stayed with the same question as far as who... and then went on to illustrate the what in each verse.

This is one of those poems that leaves the reader searching with in themselves for their own ghost and the "who" in their own life.

--Sher

Nice poem, i really like it!(o:

Compared to the first poem this was nice, i like how u repeat some words and lines. flow was okay and on how u describe your imagination were good. KEEP IT UP!!

Beautiful poem