Wow. Very good. I loved the repetition of "who are you?". That really emphasized the importance of that question. |
I like the repitition in this one. Made me want to read it until the end. I read it about five times. Who ARE you? |
by Tiffaney
Beautiful poem |
by ECILA ice
Compared to the first poem this was nice, i like how u repeat some words and lines. flow was okay and on how u describe your imagination were good. KEEP IT UP!! |
by LURVE
Nice poem, i really like it!(o: |
by Sherry Lynn
It seems that those who make some sort of impact in our lives, whether good or bad, always leaving us asking "who" and "why". |
by Hebe
Really can relate on this one. A person who left such a big impression in some way, just by see him/her once,, weird actually. |