Good poem. Confusing a bit but the meaning is powerful. I also loved the imagery. |
WOW. Babe, thats awesome.. It's like a totally different you.. It's so different to your others. Acrostics are really hard to do well but you nailed it boy! |
by ECILA ice
This was simple though still like the meaning in it. Well i like how you used acrostic to describe what you feel, the imagination were okay.4/5 |
Well done again. as always i loved the thought of this poem. a short poem with wonderful meaning. the structure was also very well put. keep up the good work 5/5 |
by Hebe
This is a good poem. |