by Catastrophic Beauty Aug 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
This is the first song I've ever written so don't be too harsh :) |
by Jess
Its good! have confidence! dont stop writing! x |
by Spirit
OH i LOVED this one |
by Kris
AN AMAZING SONG!! |
by Cella Bella
This is pretty excellent. Great rhyme and flow, I could definitely see this, or rather hear it, as a song. Wonderful write. 5/5 |
by tears i cry
Excellent exept for: And you left me here in tears |