What a beautiful write and one that I don't think anyone can deny they relate to. I've lost several people close to me and those "little things" still rekindle the memories. Nice job in capturing the feelings that swellup!

Really deep and good poem. =] 5/5

amandaxx.

5/5...i feel this way too

Very good i love the flow and word choice
provoke
(:
vvery sad i can relatee

Great poem.. well written.. 5/5

What beautiful stunning ending! i loved the whole concept of this. i found the opening to be powerful with each stanza thereafter just getting better and better. this is amazing.

Wow, I really loved this peice. The emotion expressed was beautiful The whole overall idea was amazing. You really did a great job!
5/5

Amber...

WOW i like this one... really a good and brilliant poem... keep up...

So short and sweet, yet so powerful.
very well written! 5/5

Sigh whoa
man this , i dont know what to say....

I really like this piece, your word choice is excellent and I can really relate, I've tried to capture the whole idea of memories in my work as well but I think your piece has to be one of the best I've read. As a suggestion I'd say break the stanza up between 'of you' and 'but the memories' because I think you have two ideas here that are quite distinct. A really great piece I think it will go on my favourites

ariana

Wow this is really good!

This poem is amazing. i have to say its one of my favorites....great job 5/5

This ones soo sad but also amazing writing good on ya your awsome poet

I know how this feels. I'm always trying to tell myself I won't cry a little bit anymore. I don't anymore now though. but before >_> it's nice the way you wrote about the little things that trigger huge emotions of loneliness and heartbreak. I can get that pretty easy too. even now.. but this poem was really nice. good stuff. =)

This is truelly amazing. I can relate so well to this poem.
5/5

Keep up the great work