Comments : It's better if we do

  • 17 years ago

    by Jess

    I like this poem esp the first verse, and esp the last 4 lines:
    "Sometimes it feels like
    i'm wasting my time
    and that I have to realize
    you're no longer mine"
    its weird how tho its so easy to say this, but that its so hard to actually believe and actually realise...im at this point now too, and no i have to realise this in myself...but somehow theres so much hanging on what if, that i cant :( well done xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassie Baybeee

    Wow..sounds like something i would write. i just went through a break up....keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by kaitlynmaggie

    Your poems just leave me speechless! This is really awesome, you're a really talented writer, keep writing please :)

    -katie