Nobody

by Blutonium Boy   Aug 12, 2007


Nobody can feel her tears but me,
Nobody sees the things I see.
Nobody wants her to succeed,
Everyone wants to see her bleed.

Nobody wants to be her friend,
Nobody even tries to defend,
Nobody can even comprehend,
Everyone is part of this horrible trend.

Nobody listens to her when she speaks,
Nobody hears anything but squeaks,
Nobody notices the pale in her cheeks,
Everyone keeps this up for weeks.

Nobody even notices she's gone,
Nobody notices her dead on the lawn,
Nobody notices her world withdrawn,
Everyone realizes they've lost their pawn.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Ohh... so sad... and so beautifully written... very unique style...

    Nice flow and it rhymed really well...

    Each verse has so much to say... i could feel a sad story hidden beneath those wonderful words...

    well done..
    keep writing.. :)

  • 16 years ago

    by BREEawNUHH

    Aw. This is sad. I love how it's based on stuff that really goes on in this world today. No one takes the time to realize how they treat people until it's too late.

    Good job.

    5/5

    -Briana

  • 17 years ago

    by DeMipiE iNCxXDemiXx

    Wow. been there before. really good poem. really enjoyed it. '-' (thumbs up)

  • 17 years ago

    by Noelle Wright

    Awh this poem was sad/sweet i dont know how it was sweet but i thought it was great work ^^

    Noelle

  • 17 years ago

    by Meme

    AWWW!!
    really awsome job n i loved the repivation of nobody
    keep it up

    gIrL

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