ExcellenT writinG.... 5/5

luzaN

"Nobody can even comprehend,
Everyone is part of this horrible trend."

Beautiful line, this poem's great it's full of sadness that only you feel for a person that everyone else ignores. Well done, Greta xo

AWWW!!
really awsome job n i loved the repivation of nobody
keep it up

gIrL

Awh this poem was sad/sweet i dont know how it was sweet but i thought it was great work ^^

Noelle

Wow. been there before. really good poem. really enjoyed it. '-' (thumbs up)

Aw. This is sad. I love how it's based on stuff that really goes on in this world today. No one takes the time to realize how they treat people until it's too late.

Good job.

5/5

-Briana

Ohh... so sad... and so beautifully written... very unique style...

Nice flow and it rhymed really well...

Each verse has so much to say... i could feel a sad story hidden beneath those wonderful words...

well done..
keep writing.. :)