Abandoned Angel

by Michelle18   Aug 12, 2007


She has so much beauty,
More than one could ask for.
But why is that she's lonely,
And has no one to adore.

She is a good girl,
Looking for a relationship that will last.
Trying to avoid,
Everything from her horrible past.

She doesnt sleep around,
She doesnt do drugs or drink.
She'll soon find love,
Well, thats what you would think.

But no guy wants an innocent girl,
They all want the bad.
Those thoughts overcrowd her mind,
And make her so sad.

She yearns to be loved,
But has no clue what to do.
She is an abandoned angel,
This much we know is true.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Cluadette

    I loved this poem 5/5 it's me all over and i can't believe it! i wish there was more people like me and you in this world!

  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    I liked it and how it's true to real life. The first two stanzas are really good. The third stanza was a little off for me. The fluid-ness sort of broke a little in the forth stanza for me. And I also like the last stanza, especially with the title, "abandoned angel" in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I felt sad to read this piece. N the caption seems very apt for what u hav mentioned in its content. Honestly its touching. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Veryy good , i enjoyed that one
    i will add to my favorites too

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very heartfelt .... beautifully written...

    "She is an abandoned angel,
    This much we know is true. "

    i loved these last lines specially "abandoned angel "..

    good job..

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