Comments : Abandoned Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by jeligirl

    I really like this poem alot. great job. it is soooo true!!!! =]

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    Love it. Love it. Love it. Love the title, the structure, the flow, love it all. I'm definently adding you to my favs. Brilliant job, keep it up!!

    Alyssa. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Very heartfelt .... beautifully written...

    "She is an abandoned angel,
    This much we know is true. "

    i loved these last lines specially "abandoned angel "..

    good job..

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Veryy good , i enjoyed that one
    i will add to my favorites too

  • 16 years ago

    by Fsams

    I felt sad to read this piece. N the caption seems very apt for what u hav mentioned in its content. Honestly its touching. tc

  • 16 years ago

    by khobo

    I liked it and how it's true to real life. The first two stanzas are really good. The third stanza was a little off for me. The fluid-ness sort of broke a little in the forth stanza for me. And I also like the last stanza, especially with the title, "abandoned angel" in it.

  • 16 years ago

    by Cluadette

    I loved this poem 5/5 it's me all over and i can't believe it! i wish there was more people like me and you in this world!