by BeautifulDisaster Aug 12, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
She screams |
Aww, this poem is really sweet. Except the ending line of the poem isn't that good. I lovr the poem though. 5/5 |
by Miu
It's so beautiful, interesting scene you created, problebly something that happen in your life. Imagney was so amazing here, like pictured all here. Incredible, just makes you miss the person you love. And the skies and caring, loving you give that boy. Amazing love story, Ahh i just loved this. |
by tears i cry
It was good but not excellent but i did like it i preffer stnza broken into 4 lines though |
Beautiful poem. Wonderfully penned. I think this was such a beautiful love story. Sounds like something that should be in a movie. I liked the flow of the poem and your choice of words. 5/5 |
by JaMeS
Amazing writing :) i agree beautiful |