This is beautiful!

Amazing writing :) i agree beautiful

Beautiful poem. Wonderfully penned. I think this was such a beautiful love story. Sounds like something that should be in a movie. I liked the flow of the poem and your choice of words. 5/5

-Shannon <3

It was good but not excellent but i did like it i preffer stnza broken into 4 lines though

It's so beautiful, interesting scene you created, problebly something that happen in your life. Imagney was so amazing here, like pictured all here. Incredible, just makes you miss the person you love. And the skies and caring, loving you give that boy. Amazing love story, Ahh i just loved this.

5/5 Deserves more.

Aww, this poem is really sweet. Except the ending line of the poem isn't that good. I lovr the poem though. 5/5

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