Comments : You promised

  • 17 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    Sorry I made many mistakes insted of i sat it the corner, its I sat in the corner.
    And instead of waiting,its wanting

    sorry

  • 17 years ago

    by AlexTheLion11

    Lolol great poem :D

  • 17 years ago

    by Reminders Torture

    This poem is really sad...heartbreaking and very touching...Loved the way you have described your emotions very well....Take care <3

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    That is just wow, theres nothing else to say about it, it captures the emotions amazingly and in such an accurate way its as though its a diary entry of my own. really very good 5/5!! :)

  • 17 years ago

    by alexis

    Wow great ending =)

  • 17 years ago

    by loviin hym

    Great fablous realy good beautiful wonder awsome okay you get the point ride on 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by TillyMariex

    <333 good job. i kno how that feels...well except for the taking life part but you get my point. <333

  • 17 years ago

    by jackie

    I love the way u wrote this...nice work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Rachelle

    I liked this poem its sad but a good poem 2 read