by heartbrk1 Aug 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
What would you do if you walked through the door and saw me on the floor with a empty bottle of pills in one hand and in the other a note that read help me? |
Tyeah see that one is good, i like it when u write poetry like that, its so much more meaningful and powerful because you have talked about the feel and asked questions....so much better |
PleasE writE poemS anD wE wilL reaD..ratE anD commenT.. thiS 1 iS lovelY... 5/5 |
VerY lovinG sentenceS yoU useD herE. mE luV yR stylE oF writinG thaT keepS mE verY joY..... 5/5 |
by unblue skye
So sad, yet so powerful. These words hold alot of emotion, ^^ so 5/5 i could picture this. great job. ^_^ |