Comments : Tired and Afraid

  • 17 years ago

    by TrueLover

    This is a wonderfully written poem...but you should not let him do that to you! Ever! He needs to know what he's doing.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    In most questions the answer is already hidden. So, when you say: will he ever change? I think that deep down you know the answer to this one, don't you?

    My best wishes to you. Wonderful poem, by the way! 5/5

    Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by Boy

    Aw.it was awesome. great job on this writing. nice usues of words. collection

  • 17 years ago

    by Cindy

    This is a sad piece. Love can be so painful. Yet when things are good the pain is over shadowed with joy. Hope things get better for you.
    Good job!
    Take Care Cindy

  • 17 years ago

    by Bogie

    Tammy this is a very well written poem.
    Yes, it does hold the readers attention
    from start to end but the content is so
    sad girl please talk to him about getting
    some help.
    Bogie

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammy

    I do talk to him about getting help, which is why he slept in the other room that night. However, when I woke up the next morning, he was right there beside me in bed. He knows he needs help..he doesn't argue that. I think it is more a mental addiction than a physical one.
    I honestly believe people can change & I believe he will stop...eventually. It's hard because he has the most awesome heart & he treats me like a queen. I have never felt so loved by any man in my life. But the pills ... I just ain't diggin' it :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Amy Jo

    Girl this sounds just like me and my boyfriend, if you are truly going through this talk to me I know how you feel you should also read my recent poem called Body Rage. I think you'd be able to connect a little bit in that poem or some of my explicit poems also.

  • 17 years ago

    by Ingrid

    A very dangerous choice...a man with an addiction. It is true that love can overcome all obstacles, but only if you both want it!
    I hope he wakes up in time!

    Take care,

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 17 years ago

    by ToRn iiN2 PeIcEs

    Great poem nice emotions

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    This is such a sad poem, and you describe perfectly your emotions, how it hurts you and how you don't want it to end. Very sad... I loved it. =)

  • 12 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    I hear you. A Good Write!!!