First kiss

by ViCTORiA   Aug 13, 2007


I remember my first kiss
it was like I always pictured it
it was like in the movies
holding eachother as se as we could,lip tingling, body trembling,it was soft,fire works exploding and never ending
I felt like Cinderella who finally met her Prince Charming
every kiss we shared after that made me feel the same until that one very sad unfortunate day
unlike the fairy-tales happy endings
I saw my Prince Charming kiss best friend and his new Cinderella.

~*~*~*~Victoria~*~*~*~
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  • 17 years ago

    by Marc Ortiz

    It was very cute. But the ending is really sad :(

    Anyway It was a good poem, flow was okay. just a suggestion to capitalize all the I's =)