Im getting older, years rolling by
bidding my time, inside i cry. that has real touch myheart Cindy.

Awww. What a nice poem. Excellent. Work. I want to cry. Such a sad poem. 5/5

A beautiful sad poem.
I think everything about the poem was great.
The emotions in this poem are so sad and touching.
I hope it gets better.
You take care

Cindy dear, what a sad poems, so heartbreaking.... you penned them within beautiful emotions.... i hope thing doing well with you,... hugs and kisses to remind you that someone, somewhere, cares for you... if you need to talk sometimes, I'll be here... you do take care. Love & Peace to ya... Bert.~

Wow, another excellent poem from you. Very sad and emotional.

I saw a quote somewhere that I can't remember
A human's age actually should be decided by hope within not years...

So really wipe your tears and see how many people loves you,the impress you leave on everyone...

And as a masterpiece it is so touching and advanced just like every poem of yours

My fave lines are;

I'm getting older
Years rolling by
Biding my time
Inside I cry

Take care and smile every second of life
I'm sure it looks much better on you,
Laura

Wow, Reall niice deep poem

(Thumbs up)

I think the begining of the second stanza is supposed to be many rather than may. but anyways another very good write cindy. you have become a very good writer. all the best to you ben thompson

Again and again..nice penned!!

Cindy... i am so sorry that you feel that way... but your words are excellent and they make me almost cry. it certainly touches me, cause i was there not too long ago.
Take care, Tina

I love emotional poems, so I really like this one of yours. I do hope your situation gets better !

Another brilliant poem by the amazing Cindy!

Great write - very sad but how you carry on writing and giving and reading other's poems is always an inspiration.

Mo

Absolutely beautiful, well done Cindy!

5/5 Ingrid

Many years ago
I died with you
Consuming my thoughts
Everything I do

So sad Cindy....and I can see that this verse is true......I like the short and powerful form of this poem....well done!

When i first read this i broke in tears, it remember me my litle brother, who left 3 years ago....
I still young and i dont know how hard it is to lose a husband... but i know how hard it is to lose a brother.
dont let life to bring u down, just keep living, keep living. you have to fight for your and for all the ppl that still here loving u.

i love ur poems, theyre so beatiful
keep writing :')

You captured my heart with this write that I almost shed tears. I could relate to the substance, though in a different circumstance: the moment my father was kicked out from the house. The beginning and the ending stanzas truly struck a chord with me: it explained how I felt at that moment -- a living corpse, so to speak. The good thing is that both of us can get together every now and then. I guess. Thanks for the lovely write, Miss Cindy. You're an inspiration! Love, Debbie

This is a great but said poem u got my vot 5/5

I love how each line was short...simple and yet.. powerful. amazing. great job.

I am so sorry for your loss
i cant imagine how you feel.
but i love this poem
it is simply amazing
keepitup :]]
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A truly heartbreaking write, but an amazing one at that, theres a lot of raw emotion in this, theres no holding back what so ever and thats what makes it so effective, you should really consider publishing your work elsewhere...just for the satisfaction of giving someone the feeling that "someone else has been there"...very nicely done cindy