NOBODY'S PERFECT

by ECILA ice   Aug 13, 2007


Fraud monks
Descends from their so called temple
Hiding beneath that holy dress
Acting as if they were good saints,
With their tongues sharp as a razor
Fake words of wisdom were scattered
Preaching those people to be good,
Trying to mold perfection out of imperfection
And with those keen eyes
Pretending to be innocent
Were used to criticize man with their defects
But have they forgotten one thing?
That we're residing in a place,
In a world were sins and mistakes exist
And so nobody's perfect
Neither themselves...

* I wrote it for all perfectionist were in they criticize people too much and sometimes in a wrong way. It's not wrong to criticize people and help them correct their mistakes but doing it in a wrong way is too much and could either intentionally or unintentionally hurt other's feeling. =)

** another thing i don't mean to disrespect any religious sectors nor religious people don't get me wrong i'm not an aethist nor a member of any anti-religious what so ever.. this was merely a metaphor, simile, and hyperbole.Just a simple material to describe my ideas. thanx

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  • 17 years ago

    by Vincent Thornsberry

    I agree with this poem, ive been cast into its harsh reality

  • 17 years ago

    by Kalee

    I agree 100% no one is perfect. but this poem is very near perfect. it is absolutely wonderfully written and it speaks the truth. well done. 5/5

    Kalee

  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    I agree nobody's perfect! i was impressed theres a lot of very meaningful words in this poem great one5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Alissa

    I loved it, the words you chose....so original. So meaningful, they sparked wonderful images, they really brought out your idea and made me understand the metaphor. It was great, I loved it alot.

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Wow this is great....i really like it.

    the message of this is important and it really got across...i give you props for this one.

    5/5 from me.