Very interesting, it is deeper than it seems on a first look. I like the topic and atmosphere was very haunting. YOU REALLY IMPROVING YOUR TALENT(and that is very big and great thing) I am proud on you, this piece is amazing. It really deserves 5/5

Ohh it gave me chills. nice one. 5/5.
love willow oxox

Hey,
I like it. You put some nice work in it....Just like you do all of your poems. Keep up all the good work....They are all good.

The suspense was amazing.. kept me intrigued the whole way. This piece gave me goose bumps lol.. Great work