Well written, good flow :)

Very true, well thaught out :)

Dave.

Hi

Just wanna say that this poem was good, i enjoyed reading it. I must be honest tho- i thought it was a bit simple. I like poems that have a lot of meaning to it.

Besides that you are a good writer and i see that you enjoy writing.
(AND this poem i can tell it was written from experience)

WELL DONE -

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Hey...a guy like that isnt worth ur time...u need 2 find a guy who really cares for you and take ur time because its the sad truth but there arent that many good guys...but i liked the poem...the format was different and i like unique stuff...keep it up :)

I really like this poem...i LOVED this guy for 4 years and one year i had someone tell him for me...not asking him out just to let him no that i liked him...well one day i saw him danceing w/someone and (even tho it wasnt anything that he did on purpose...) it hurt...it felt lik i had just been stabbed...so i can relate to this poem in a way that i no what it feels lik to see someone you love so dearly, danceing or with someone else. i give u a 5/5...keep writing

I like this one too..good job