by Cindy
Nice job on this collab. You have shown the true meaning of friendship :) |
Thats a lovely one.... |
by Fsams
Great poem with great meanings and good word choice. I really like the way it expresses the qualities of friends and friendship. 5/5 for the beautiful work. I would like to give suggeations also.."every sin" better collocates than "any sin". In line 11 correct the typo "your/you're" Keep it up |
by Gasttlee
Amazing write! 5/5 |
This is really good. I like it ... |
by Kris
I really liked it. It is so true about true friends. |
by jyzka
Nice piece of writing... it really made me feel thankful for having a friend... just as you describe.. |
by Birgit
This is just a nice poem, about what friendship is. It really describes it.. and it's beautiful =] |
by Ike Dizzle
Great poem only this you spelled defense wrong lol. Great job though |
I liked this one alot |