by Beautifully Nothing
YES! so true. i'm glad somebody else finally sees that men gossip much more then women! this poem was very fun to read. (you can count on me showing this to all my guy friends...they think i am the only person who think this) the flow was great, the rhymes were good. this isn't a topic alot of people would pick, which i absolutely loved. i'm glad you can come up with your own ideas for a poem instead of just the normal "my boyfriend broke up with me, my life sucks" thing. great job!!! |
by June
Firstly I would like to thank you so much for all your comments on my writes ,all were very much appreciated and mean alot. |
by StandStill
I actually really liked this! it's almost whimsical. great job! |
by oNice
This was humorously written with great meter! Although I must say that gossip can’t be just denoted to one sex, but none the less I understand the satire! |
by AmberSherrellxxIve Been Sitting Here Trying To Find Myselfxx
Ha!This was a great poem...the flow was a little forced but that's not a biggie.Ummm...I think that "sole" should be spelled "soul. Anyways,it's good to know that someone else agrees that men gossip just as much as women do.5/5 |
by Live WeLL
Haha this is really funny and its so true... everyone is quick to blame women on gossip but men are just as much to blame if not more!... i really enjoyed this poem.. it was humorous but very trueee... excellent write.. good flow and word choice.. nicely done.. and thanks for the comment =) |
by Crystal
This is great! shows both the sides of men and women. 5/5 |
Yep, we are gossips, I cannot deny! I'm a bit confused about this poem though. It starts off with a rhyming stanza, but then the next 3 don't. I know I'm probably just being a stickler for traditional poetic structures, but it struck me as an odd decision for a work. And I also wonder at the use of the word "sole". Soul, perhaps? |