by Rose not your average Aug 13, 2007
category :
Friendship, family /
broken friendship
Looking out the window. |
by Rachel RTVW
Too many I's again, filler words and forced rhyming. It also lacks structure and flow.....Where are these 4's at again? |
by tears i cry
I didnt like it very much the first stanza through it al of for me 3/5 |
by Crystal Gaze
It was an emotional read. |
by Wallace
Very good. So much strong emotions in there. Very good poem, keep it up. |
Wow. Very sad but I love this one too! It's very good and I felt as if I were there... |