Really deep and sad poem, i liked it alot great work you got here cant wait to read more 5/5 !

Well Done! Some good heartfelt quality .Thanx for giving me a comment
5/5
Osita~

Wow. Very good write. Full of truth and voice. It was quite long, but it was most definately worth the read. 5/5

I loved it, so much emotion.

So many kids are going through that situation, it sad really. You did an amazing job writing this poem.

This is incredibly sad because you have just described the feelings of soooo many men and women out there..seeking to be loved, accepted, admired...it's so sad how depression sinks in and before you know it you're life is a living hell because of it...

As far as your poem goes, I'd say watch your syllable count. i like that you were rhyming but I wasn't sure what kind of form you were using, I was just thrown of a few times and had to re-read a few things....over all I thought it was a good poem! Loved the title!
Keep it up
Chelsey

I know I'm extremely late but thanks for all the feedback!!! I haven't been on here in a while, nor have I written any poetry in a long time....I'm off to see what new poems have been uploaded (I'll start with the 5 of you first...thanx again!!)

Thanx!...not sure if there's a way to tell but I did the same thing earlier to "Sad Story "A Blind Woman"

"I KNOW THIS IS WHO I AM, BUT NOT WHO I'M SUPPOSED TO BE." i love this sentence...so simple but with in depth meanings=)