OH this was totaly sweet and i like it but (just my opinion) that last stanza doesn't jive with the whole content coz it seems that the poem talks about the love you and your bf had then suddenly it went that way in the last stanza. But then I still love it.. KEEP IT UP!

Awesome job, im actually usually quite tough on poems and such, but you and your boyfriend did a great job together. it's so cute how you both did it. the flow was nice, it rhyme (not all poems have to rhyme) but it usually works better. so i give you a 5/5 nice job.

xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArTxx

This is a greatly written perfect poem, you have done a great job...
keep up the great work as you are really talented

a 5/5 from me as you really deserve it.

This is beautiful! 5/5

It was a great collab. I find it really sweet and to be honest.. I envy you guys.. I have never collab with my ex.. or with anyone.

Keep up the good work!
5/5

AWW! It's adorable! Your ex sounds like just the kind of guy you would want to be with. It's cute how you two wrote this together. The flowing of this poem got better near the ending. At the beginning, it seemed a bit forced, but not overly bad. No worries. I liked how you refered to him/each other all the time. And how love was about getting through the rough patches. It really is what love is about. Good job. =) 5/5 xoxo

Samantha

I could say cute. but I won't because I don't talk like that. Another good poem. Out of the two I've read I like this one most. I guess Ill let you know, the last two stanzas are my favorite. Like I said. just got my attnetion XD Don't stop the good work.

This is a really good collab you and your x boyfriend did an amazing job...It was really sweet...

5/5 ^_^

The last stanza kind of threw me off, but apart from that, the flow was flawless, the emotion was portrayed well. It was very sweet and a very good collab between you.
well done
love Tara-Kay
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I cnt believe after readin this they cheated on you 5/5 for good flow

"I knew you was special" , it should be were instead of was... I like the concept, again this piece is very relatable. great read. 5/5

marcella

This was so sweet...I found this to be very romantic and moving.
Imagery you painted in this creates very vivid pictures in the reader's mind...beautiful work.

Wow... this is very good! The flow and form are excellent!!

Would this be the boyfriend who is now an ex and "the jerk"..?

5.5**
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AWESOME!