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by ben thompson Aug 13, 2007 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
The air thick with danger on a hot summer eve. Eerie feelings surround this pending calamity. I creep through the haze stealth without sound. Ahead my lone target stretching on the ground. A vibrant young Blonde no older than twenty-five. In a few minutes time, she'll cease to be alive. Power courses through me as I seek to play God. Such an addicting feeling, although its very odd. Plans calculated in advance, actions cruel and precise. I spring forth from my hiding, wielding a large knife. Pouncing like a hungry puma upon its wild prey. Look of surprise in her eyes, today is her last day. I drug her body off as she took a final breath. She shed a lone tear, the knife ripped from her chest. I placed her in a grave along an abandoned path. To keep the others company, a testament to my wrath.This is a work of fiction. although evil people commit crimes like this every day.
by Chris W.
Great poem. its nice to read one that keeps you wanting to read on, like a page turner
by Cindy
Ben Wow! What an eerie tale. Fantastic imagery. This is sure to give anyone chills. Great job! Love Cindy