Dream Come True.

by babblingxbrooke   Aug 13, 2007


Our eyes met and that second I knew,
you were my dream come true.

I was nervous and had to look away,
I wasn't sure if I wanted you to stay.

you came turned my head and took my hand,
I could feel my feet start to leave the land.

my spirits high; I was walking on clouds,
so many emotions my heart began beating loud.

with you I could just be myself,
and not have to act like anyone else.

once again our eyes met,
I didn't want to leave you yet.

you let go of my hand and I fell to the ground,
and I woke up without making a sound.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Laura Ash

    "I could feel my feel starting to leave the land
    My spirits high; I was walking on the clouds"
    I love that line

  • 17 years ago

    by Cotton Candy Clouds

    Wow that was a really cute poem hunn you made it flow so nicely i loved it<33 5/5

    p.s. thanks for your comment on my poems "anyone can see this love you killed is killing me" it really means a lot thanks hunn<33

  • 17 years ago

    by Corruption

    Heya
    tis a good poem
    good flow
    good job

    Keenan

  • 17 years ago

    by Michelle18

    Oh wow!...this is truely amazing! i love it... i felt like i was melting as i was reading it..lol seriously i dont know i cant explain it..

    but it flowed perfectly...definately 5/5 on this one.. keep it up!

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