by Roxy Aug 13, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tears crumble down my cheeks. |
by Cassie Cain
Nice, i really like this poem. keep up the good work. |
by Sora
Wow this was a great piece. very deep and beautiful. just filled with so many different emotions. poems like these are my favortie to read. you have a great talent, keep writing! 5/5. |
by sweet escape
I have one question, is this a poem to yourself in the past or somebody else? it seems like a worning. like you want this person to live a easier life than you yourself have lived. |
by she
Wow, alot of emotion,good job |
by Jenny
I like the expressions you put into this. You did an awsome job. Keep it up. |