Thats a very sad poem, I hope your feeling better now. I have to admit it was sad but good also. And by the way thank you for commenting my poem. 5/5

I usually don't read sad poems. But since you asked me to I did, didn't think I'd like it. But It was good. Soon as I read the first stanza i was into it. Lol Keep it up =)

Great poem very well written

This is well written... keep up the good work

A superbly penned piece.. amazingly expressed.. a great flow to it gives it another nudge to the top.. amazing work. Loved IT !
and even though its sad . . . it still would be the best i read ..

keep that head up ^^

~Wake~

I'm Putting This In My Favourites STRAIGHT AWAY =] !!
I Really LOVE This Poem.
Especially The First Verse.
Really Really Really Really Good!

I like the expressions you put into this. You did an awsome job. Keep it up.

Wow, alot of emotion,good job

I have one question, is this a poem to yourself in the past or somebody else? it seems like a worning. like you want this person to live a easier life than you yourself have lived.

great flow, feeling, meaning, and everything else.

5/5

Wow this was a great piece. very deep and beautiful. just filled with so many different emotions. poems like these are my favortie to read. you have a great talent, keep writing! 5/5.

-Ashlei.

Nice, i really like this poem. keep up the good work.