This is really sweet.. I think the flow was okay, keep up the good work.

I really adore this two lines.
My love for you will never fade
How as long as my heart beats strong & true

"my stomach falls to my feet". I love that line. And I love that feeling...that little rush you get when the one you love comes near you. You described it well in that line and in the whole poem. Liked it a lot!

This poem is so cute, i love the flow and the wording, i just love the whole thing!=]

It was so adroing and touching..Your word usage was so suitable
just a spell mistake:forver=forever

Keep it up,
Laura

It was so adroing and touching..Your word usage was so suitable
just a spell mistake:forver=forever

Keep it up,
Laura

Aw, what an emotional and heartwarming poem. great job, I loved it. :)