This is a really Beautifully Written poem..great piece work..so emotional..flawless..wonderful..well done
I give u 5/5 u deserve it!
-sarah

Wow, this is a really great poem...i'm gonna let my lover read it, and see wat he thinks...good job!! 5/5

Awww that is so cute. very good. 5/5 keep it up.

I love it! The "not been told" part really surprised me! I love when poems do that!

This was done really amazing...The flow was flawless...You have done an excellent job for this...Keep it up..
Take care

I wish I'd told you how much,
I love you, when you were in my hold.
It hurts so much that i have,
All this love for and you've not been told.

^loved that stanza, great work!... the flow was great, and so was the rhymingg.. 5/5 from me, and thank you so much for the comment... keep it upp!

That is really good I just love it a lot. My boyfriend likes it a lot too. We feel the same way we love eachother more than words can tell and speak. Nice truth to it. I really like it so keep up all the wonderful work that you have while writing your poems. I really love them just had to say again.

I love this poem its so good.....i really shows true feelings when someone loves someone

5/5 this was very well written- in otherwords, YOURE AN AWESOME POETESS!!! lol, its true tho:)

I love this poem... you did really well one it. your a great poet

Nicely done.
Love has got to be the most confusing thing in the world the best and the hardest all at once

I like this. its hard to tell someone you love them when that fear just washes up and drowns you. but a love not loved is a love lost... so which ever is the greater pain.

This is a real nice poem...is well written...good job...

Great Peace of Work Done By You..
with the desires of real love.... I really like and enjoyed with your work....:) 5/5

RASHEED

Oh my good Lord!! This is SO good, I love it!

This is so lovely so strong so much power i loved reading this and the flow is just great read more like this x

One of the most beautiful poems i have ever read...very wonderful i can describe its beauty...
he is so lucky to have an intellegent poet as a lover

Love this poem ;))

K~