I thought the poem would be diffrent that what it was i really enjoyed it! the flow was good and you used strong words!

Beautiful poem. All your poems flow so nicely. The rhyming was good too and did not seem forced at all. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Your poem's are consistent, in spacing out the line's.
your flow is amazing,and the rymthes likewise.
Your very talented,
Keep it up
Elaine.

Interesting poem. I wish you used rhyming words that were a little more complex but that's just me. I know a girl that's the exact oposite and likes simple words. You were consistant in rhyming and you got the message across. I'm not usually big on love poems because they all seem to sound alike. I'll give it a three so the rating goes down to a four point something.