by Karin Erlacher Aug 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
I'm just a glitch in your life |
I liked it. The rhyming was consistant and it flowed well. The last lines were good. I'll give it a five. |
by Crystal Gaze
Very much like the last. |
Great poem. The flow was flawless and the rhyming was consistent. I really love how you space out your lines. 5/5 |
You a a very good writer! this poem was very well done maybe a bit forced on the rhyming! |