You a a very good writer! this poem was very well done maybe a bit forced on the rhyming!

Great poem. The flow was flawless and the rhyming was consistent. I really love how you space out your lines. 5/5

-Shannon <3

Very much like the last.
So what more can I say.
It was excellently written,
and I enjoyed it alot.

Keep writting,
Elaine.

I liked it. The rhyming was consistant and it flowed well. The last lines were good. I'll give it a five.