One Last Moment

Wow .. This is really good . It takes alot of talent to rhyme abab , and even more to make the flow flawless . I love it , very heartfelt .

I really like this piece good emotion topic, the words we good and the flow was nice too well done :)

I definitly love the form, it makes it easier too read, and add's too the simplicity.
The flow and rymthing where great, and you did and excellent job in making the content emotional.

Well done,
An enjoyable read.
Elaine.

Great poem. Beautifully written. I loved how you spaced it out. I think a lot of people can relate to this poem.

Well done! 5/5

-Shannon <3

This was a beautiful poem well done! the flow and rhyming was great an i can relate to it! 5/5