3ver l@$T!nG l0v3

by brandi   Aug 14, 2007


I love you and wanna to be with you always, some people think its just a faze but babiboi what i feel for u is real. i think about you night and day and smiling think of all the sweet things you say. i going to be your forever even through the bad weather. i hope you understand how much i love and care for you cause with you i know all my dreams will come true.

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Steven

    Haha it was interesting, just spread it out a bit.. so makes it easy to read that wall.. but all in, it's a really good poem
    -steven

  • 17 years ago

    by xxdOnTbReAkMyHeArtxx

    Umm this is just from my point of view, sure it shows what you feel but no rhyming, and the flow is off, it was confusing because it wasnt seperated at all, and some words you used i couldnt understand. so keep that in mind..