Aww this is really good.sad but good.keep up the good work.

I would just lose you baby
id also lose me

should that line read "I wouldN'T just lose you baby" ??? just wondering. lol I think the piece was sweet. I appreciate your comment on my work as well :)
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Awe. this is sweet.
5/5.

I never really took anything serious
i was always up for fun
but then you walked into my life
and heart over head had won

Heartover head had won.
I love this line. 5/5