by Jason
Well written poem. When I read this poem, I hear beautiful words in my head. |
by No one
Wow! I love it, so powerful. And I like the well, kind of contradicting lines. That you would house you're special person 'cause you'd do that with a dog! *humour!* |
by Jessica
And for loving you most of all. |
by JaMeS
This was a nice piece you could tweak it abit to make it read more smoothly but apart from that a good read :) |
by stefanie
I can so relate to this. its like you took the words that i wish to say to someone right out of my mouth. great job. it got straight to the point and the message was sent out clearly. beautifully written. |
by BlueDreams
Beautiful expressed emotions penned, "Love is a choice and commitment to others' true and lasting happiness. It is dedicated to growth and fulfillment. Love is not selfish." |
Aww beautiful poem! 5/5 i love the emotion in this poem and the words you used and everything about it, i thought it was excellent! |
by LovelyDivine
All I can say is wow! That really got to my heart. sometimes it can be so hard to find someone that will love you for who you are. Hope you find that person. 5/5 |
by Debbie
Though on certain parts of the poem the flow was rather uneven, it nevertheless carried much significance and truth in its essence. Love is a wonderful principle and sensation. With this universal feeling, the person discovers his true self. It really is a sad thing how most relationships nowadays end in vain. Thanks for sharing a wonderful message that would definitely enlighten your readers. Regards. |
Great one. Love it!!! |