I know who killed me

by Veamm   Aug 14, 2007


I know who killed me

Since the day that I was born
I remember how much I was in pain
those suffering that I felt alone
no body knew I left my home

I know that life is not that easy
so I returned, but still it is tragedy
I live my life in my ghostly room
never smiled and felt no bloom

till one day I decided for my end
to cure my mind, straight every bend
I know I'm crazy, Yes I'm crazy
I feel cold, release my worries

Dead clouds over my head
and shadows beneath my feet
I can feel them, their in here
around me,on my front and my rear

now they whispered in my ear
echoes bounce, words of fear
ready to slit, ready to feed
I'm confused, dragging my feet

I hide and afraid, they chase me
endless running, wanted to flee
asking why, my life is in doom
fires surrounds me in my room

the floor sip down my blood
all memories buried on mud
but today I know who killed me
because that person is me

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  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    Waahh got nothing to do pare.. so i scan your poems.. i like this one it says about whose to blame if something went wrong (it's you alone coz u chose that path though sometimes, you decided to take which you thought is the right path later in life you can't help not to regret something.. just my opinion, in every corner there are regression) whoa! am i blabbing too much? your poem caused me this 'coz this one really caught my whole interest.. meaning EXCELLENT POEM pare keep it up!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Ahh so nice. How the emotions just all went into me. Really touching, and i think the end was so powerful. Also, what captured was the headline.
    Keep writing 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Chaos

    Again other than the grammar I thought this was a good write, it flowed well beginning into end. Nice job.

  • 17 years ago

    by janiL

    Totally cool! ^__^

    you're good!!!
    but hei, you have to spell check.. like "their in here," i think that's supposed to be they're not their.. and echos are echoes.. and i think bragging my feet is supposed to be dragging.. (but i might be just making stupid assumptions..=P) well..i did understand your poem and it was great!! but these tiny errors just bothered me..=P

    anyway..this poem is really well worded and pulsates emotion from each line..

    nice!!^__^
    5/5!!

  • 17 years ago

    by Pesamenteiro

    Love the idea of the poem.
    A deffinate 5/5

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