Wow your poems was excellent! great job!

This was amazing very emotional and so much meanng behind each word everything was so perfect about this write you kept the flow and the interest of the reader through the whole read another 5/5

laura

Nice poem...it had alot of emotion put into it... i enjoyed reading this one... you definately have some talent.5/5.

Love the idea of the poem.
A deffinate 5/5

Totally cool! ^__^

you're good!!!
but hei, you have to spell check.. like "their in here," i think that's supposed to be they're not their.. and echos are echoes.. and i think bragging my feet is supposed to be dragging.. (but i might be just making stupid assumptions..=P) well..i did understand your poem and it was great!! but these tiny errors just bothered me..=P

anyway..this poem is really well worded and pulsates emotion from each line..

nice!!^__^
5/5!!

Again other than the grammar I thought this was a good write, it flowed well beginning into end. Nice job.

Ahh so nice. How the emotions just all went into me. Really touching, and i think the end was so powerful. Also, what captured was the headline.
Keep writing 5/5

Waahh got nothing to do pare.. so i scan your poems.. i like this one it says about whose to blame if something went wrong (it's you alone coz u chose that path though sometimes, you decided to take which you thought is the right path later in life you can't help not to regret something.. just my opinion, in every corner there are regression) whoa! am i blabbing too much? your poem caused me this 'coz this one really caught my whole interest.. meaning EXCELLENT POEM pare keep it up!!