Comments : Fake smile

  • 17 years ago

    by XDeesxToxicxCookiesX

    Wow!! Its really sad and deep, I love it, iys full of meanings, it touched my feelings...
    good job 5/5 i really loved it

  • 17 years ago

    by BrokenVodkaBottle

    This really good i love the poem xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Shadows Reign

    This is pretty good for a "cutter" poem. As you read, you can really feel your pain and angst. Love some of the wording used, my favourite 2 lines would have to be:
    'so i let my life go
    and i took in the flame'

    Keep up the good work.

  • 17 years ago

    by MeganLeigh

    Wow, very powerful! I love this poem because I can relate so much. Keep it up!