Perfect Pain

by Alone in the crowd   Aug 14, 2007


Perfect love?
Perfect boy?
Perfect girl?
Beautiful? i think not

You may say I'm crazy
You may think I'm wrong
But there is one thing in my life
Of the perfect pain

Or so i thought

You may say I'm crazy
You may think I'm wrong
But there is one thing in my life
That's perfect

And that's perfect pain
Watches me brush my hair
"You're perfect"
He watches my hand
The eyeliner spreads
"You're beautiful"

Oh perfect pain, pain, pain

Why is he here?
I want you!

The day you left i found

The Perfect Pain

(its by my friend so leave good comments for her)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved how different the style was. It was very enjoyable to read. The emotions were real and enjoyable and I also liked how you told a story. Well done *5/5*

    _thank you for your comment on my poem :]

  • 17 years ago

    by amandalynn

    Really good poem. =]] 5/5

    amanda.

  • 17 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    The way u wrote this caught my attention right away...well done 5/5

    please keep writing and I will keep reading

  • 17 years ago

    by David

    Great poem

  • 17 years ago

    by X Kashies Misery X

    That is a bit creepy...is ...she...emo?....just the paina nd eye liner thing.....but yeah I liked it, it was very catchy

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