This was great. keep up the goo work. it caught my attention real quick.

That is a bit creepy...is ...she...emo?....just the paina nd eye liner thing.....but yeah I liked it, it was very catchy

Great poem

The way u wrote this caught my attention right away...well done 5/5

please keep writing and I will keep reading

Really good poem. =]] 5/5

amanda.

I loved how different the style was. It was very enjoyable to read. The emotions were real and enjoyable and I also liked how you told a story. Well done *5/5*

_thank you for your comment on my poem :]