Life

by Bogie   Aug 14, 2007


Life (revised)

Inside an egg where life divine keeps
Deep in a seed the miracle sleeps
Awaiting a spark to start from outside
Persistent penetration will provide
Life to awaken by stimulation
The motion ignites continuation
Breaches deep and completes the cycle
Precious is life in balance held fragile

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  • 17 years ago

    by ghosts in bloom

    This is such an awe-inspiring write. Short, but packs punch, and with musical flow. Your word usage was great, and the rhyming was on point.
    A very lovely job! [:

    Write On,
    Take Care,
    Smiles,
    *N

  • 17 years ago

    by Nix

    I like it very much! It is interesting, short but very powerful. Imagery is great and you created excellent imagery.
    Well done 5/5

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