I like how the main focus on this poem was "silence", and how it can be such a horrible thing. Good job. |
by Nix
Very interesting, it is original and you wrote this piece greatly. First two stanzas are the greatest. You created haunting atmosphere, and I can hear that silence! |
by lish
This is the best so far really good :) |
by Vanessa
I like the style of this one, the silience can be unbearable, or it can be a blessing, the flow is god, the emotion is strong, to make it better instead of using words like wanna use want. Other than that this was a perecrt penned poem 5/5 |
by Veamm
Short but too descriptive on every end..keep it up!! |
by SpEcIaLmE
I feel like that all the time and want 2 b alone cuz i believe that it will make it betta but it doesnt :P |