Final song

by the come back   Aug 14, 2007


The last time I see you,
that I feel insecure with you
and the last time I think of you,
that i notice that you don't love me too

The lullaby's that says goodbye's,
the word love that says lie,
the feeling that i want to die
all of that brings me to cry

So this is my final song to you
that i want to offer for you
as a remembrance to the sadness that you do
In the past years that we've gone though

Why make me insane for you,
why make me so in love with you
You made a biggest mistake that you do
from the final song specially for you

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  • 17 years ago

    by Marissa Marzano

    Good job.
    i totally understand where your coming from
    i feel exactly the same way about this guy.

    x
    Marissa.

  • 17 years ago

    by Woe

    Oh gosh. i LOVE this one. im nominating it for the weekly contest. ;D good luck

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    Dear I gave you 5/5 despite the fact that it has grammar probs. I know you will correct them. The first line and the second line has tense prob, so correct it my dear. You are a good writer.

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Ganun pa rin.,.,pero okay lang yan kasi beginner ka pa naman eh.,!!mag praktis ka pa.,

  • 17 years ago

    by nikki

    The flow was a little off but i cant down vote you for that. i loved it 5/5

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