Friends or lovers?

by the come back   Aug 14, 2007


Can friends be lovers too?
that's my question to you
I'm scared to say it to you
because I don't know if you love me too

Everyday we've been together,
every hour we speak and the laughter
all of that will be surrendered,
when I say I love her

When you hold my arms tight,
my heart beats
when you hold my hands
my mind resists

It is hard to be with you
now I know that I love you
I don't want to lose you
when I say that I love you

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Trio

    Simple and right to the point.
    Your emotions are clearly displayed.
    I hope she realizes what she is missing.

  • 16 years ago

    by desiree

    VeryGoooood!

    5/5
    I can SO relate.
    message me.i'll tell you dee storie.

  • 17 years ago

    by azii

    I like this poem it's so cute :)It reminds me one of my fav quotes: Somewhere between our talks and laughters, I fell for you. Or something like that.. However, It was great Keep it up.
    5/5
    take care

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    The rhetorical questions are really engaging. Thats a very good quality in your poem. I loved tha way its strung. 5/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by Eminent Bard

    Nice..,.,heheh..,okay rin basta wag mong ulit ulitin ang mga words na nasa hulihan,.,

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