Wineglass

by Sumit Ojha   Aug 14, 2007


Red, Salty Wine
Make my life fine.
My Wine is your Blood
And you are my Wineglass

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  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Ha ha! You baaad vampire! Short, but way cool. So much said in so few words. Great.

  • 15 years ago

    by DreamingOutLoud

    CRREEAATTIIIVVEEE =)))

  • 15 years ago

    by Teria

    "Red, Salty Wine
    Make my life fine.
    My Wine is your Blood
    And you are my Wineglass"

    you are = you're? - I think it sounds better like that.

    I didn't like your rhymes in the first two lines, I think they were kind of cheesy. BUT, I do like the poem. It's well written. Short but to the point. To me, it could even be a love poem. Or a nature poem. It could go ANY way the reader pleases it to go.

  • 15 years ago

    by Katie

    I'm not really into dark poems, but this one is really cool. That's cool saying she's your wineglass!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    You need to expand on this. If you were to write more, then it would be more enticing to the audience. Otherwise, it was a good poem.

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