Good poem
short but well written
the flow is done well
but it was a bit confusing
but you still did good

Keenan

Vampyres everywhere...i didn't interpret this one quite like that...but i sure liked it

Even though this one is so short I thought it was awesome. It says so much, especially the last 2 lines. 5/5

You need to expand on this. If you were to write more, then it would be more enticing to the audience. Otherwise, it was a good poem.

I'm not really into dark poems, but this one is really cool. That's cool saying she's your wineglass!

"Red, Salty Wine
Make my life fine.
My Wine is your Blood
And you are my Wineglass"

you are = you're? - I think it sounds better like that.

I didn't like your rhymes in the first two lines, I think they were kind of cheesy. BUT, I do like the poem. It's well written. Short but to the point. To me, it could even be a love poem. Or a nature poem. It could go ANY way the reader pleases it to go.

CRREEAATTIIIVVEEE =)))

Ha ha! You baaad vampire! Short, but way cool. So much said in so few words. Great.