Great write , wonderfully written and very deep and word choice was good, I liked this piece, great job... your friend Tracy d,,

It was good

The beginning of your poem was strong as you used many metaphors and similies, but as it progressed on it became a little far fetched. Otherwise, it was a good poem. 4/5

Very nice write. I think that you could have done a better job with the grammar, but other than that it was great. So I'll give it a 4/5. Good job.

"Like a rose, need water
Like a season, need change"
-i love the symbolism you used here, for me, the most powerful lines of the entire poem. the ending is great. i loved the flow over, you did a great job!